Wish i cud be....
Wish I could be the earth
Or maybe become the sun
Play for long being the clouds
Or tease the wind for fun
Someday put on a winter
Go change into a spring
Making flowers blossom
The trees and grass swing
When I feel too hot
I perhaps go hide the sun
With black clouds as hair
I make them into a bun
A flash of lightning
And I pour in the rain
Wetting up the earth
But somehow all in vain
Let me quench my thirst
Let me drink the earth
To my heart’s content
For my money’s worth.
14 comments:
Lovely! :)
cute poetry :)
Thanks Queenie and Pseudo(Prefer using a short name instead). Plz also go thru the earlier posts. They are not many....
ohh yes never put limits to 'dreams' .. :) lovely pain .. simple yet profound..
It's all linked to happiness.
Very nice.
Thanks Aria my dear cant beat the Shakespeare in u tho....
Thnx tups i m glad all is comin out as finally happy thoughts....
omg..this was beautifully expressed :)
a dreamy post..thanks for dropping in at backpacker and for your views there
hey u ve a lovely way f writng poetry..makes 1 imagine d thngs ur tryng 2 convey :)!! keep goin dude !! n thanx a lot 4 commenting on my post...tats my 1st post n urs s d 1st comment :)!!
wow man, this is a brilliant poem. uncover the poet in you chirag. awesome thinking and perfect rhyming... way to go bro... cheers -niraj
Thnx Divz 4 comin and leavin a sweet note....
Dreams of reality Lakshmi, a reality one wud love to wander away to in such times.Thnx for visiting & the lovely note....
Thought Express i loved the purity of ur post and i appreciate u leavin a note on mine....
Niraj my brother thnk u for the appreciation....
I love the free-spirited nature of it all :) only thing is, your thoughts seem too disconnected at times. i have the same issue...too many colliding thots & the need 2 capture them all :)
good work!
reminds me of a tag i had to write on...
I liked the 3rd verse the most.
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