Surrounded by you
I craved for your love
Sitting besides you
I longed for your love
Died a million times
Only to be born again
Endured heaven sometimes hell
Till I could breathe again
High time I realized
What life has to say?
Times too short
Got too many roles to play....
P.S. I played so many in the last one. Some more coming up soon....
36 comments:
Hi Chirag,
A very interesting blog. I would love to chat up with you. You can call mail me at anuradhagoyal at gmail and I will share my no with you.
-Anu
too many roles to play,
too many sounds to hear,
too many words to say,
too many melodies to sing,
its all too many,
its sometimes too fast,
stop a while,
lets dance some more :)
::u might like this-http://moonlovechild.blogspot.com/2007/10/poetry-for-thought_15.html
Very nice and Innocent peom. Keep up the good work.
Regards,
Thanx Anuradha, m surely talkin u wenever next u r online....
Princess though Kishmish is cuter thnx for the lines.Yes they mean a lot more now though my thirst for roleplay has increased now having watched Rock On ystrday....
Thnx Inspiration.Wud love to know ur real name though....
http://moonlovechild.blogspot.com/2007/10/poetry-for-thought_15.html this the one
oh! Very nice and sweet :)
you really write beautifully .. the title grabbed my attention .. I was expecting something else but was bowled over by the simplicity with which you expressed such profound emotions..
Nice poem but I felt that it ended abruptly.
Nice short poem, but did it not end abruptly?
hey!gud post,keep ritin..
Princess the page does not exist. tried many a times....
Veens thnx dear for comin over and leaving a sweet comment. Plz kp coming....
Aria i truly thnk u for such wonderful appreciation of my work but i must say its not that grt as urs which simply puts me in awe of u and ur work....
Whoami well it did end abruptly but then as i mentioned it was moreover a continuation of my last post"Wish i cud be" and like a child i jus suddenly felt tired and went off to sleep....
Thnx Anwesa for coming by.Wud luv to c u around....
loved the last four lines ;)
nice blog :)
wow..wow..wow...
i rly rly loved it...
rly nice post...
hmmm ..... nice n intersting!!!
love this line especially
***Died a million times
Only to be born again
liked it a lot :)
Thanks Divz for coming. I am really thankful for the praise. Plz kp coming....
Pooja hey nice of u to hv come.Kp comin and thnx so much.I appreciate it....
And lastly Munnabehen bahut dhanyawaad ki aap aaye.Thnx dear kp comin....
Love? Or a love lost? Very beautiful words :)
Nice one..... keep writing! :)
-Yashu
chweeeeeeet :)))
Too many....its all about perspective, isn't it?
Nice poem!
Essentially, we are all small-part actor, the only focus is who's been lucky enough to play leading roles for most of one's life or did you get stomped by someone else because you were vulnerable or you didn't try enough!
ohhh wow
u r salsa instructur
mastt
hey nice. I havent read the previous one though. M here fr the first time.
Surrounded by you
I craved for your love
Sitting besides you
I longed for your love
>> this is like whn u close u scared to express but whn u far u feel u cud be better whn u were close. distance makes us more close to ppl but at times it gets us away too. Dont knw wht exactly was in ur mind
Liked your simple but touching verses. The last one has a Robert Frost feel to it :)
beautiful!
**Died a million times
Only to be born again
I know that feeling ver well.
And yes, I hv, am and will be playing so many roles in this life...and to be honest Im a lil sick of it too :)
Keshi.
Thnx Queenie. Kp comin for more....
Thnx Yashu i shall kp writin provided u kp coming....
Trinaa for some reasons all the other blogs i hv bn to ur comments hv stood out for the volume u hv written and the sweetness wid which u wrote.thnx a ton dear....
Solitaire I cant say perspective entirely its also the willingness to drown myself somewhere else away from the real realisation of the love lost....
Subashini i wont say i allowed myslf to be trampled but simply being there yet not be noticed or understood is wat i mean here.Rather than questioning it i just willingly drown myself playin roles....
Oh thnx Joi and yes i m a Salsa Instructor takin classes at Koramangla. Check our website out www.salsabangalore.com for more details....
Nidhi thanx for comin dear and hey plz give my blog a little more time.there are very limited posts;) About wat i really mean i guess i hv explained above....
I loved the last line. Makes a lot of sense... You should write more.
Roopa mah frnd thnk u for the compliments.Hopin to hv u visit more often!
Keshi i totally know why one hates the roleplay even though its fascinatin. Anyways plz come again and thnx for the support....
Sheetal thnx for comin and for the appreciation....
This one is simple and deep. enjoyed reading it.
hey some lovely verses you've got here!!
thanks for stopping by my blog!
hey!! you said my few lines which i wrote were nice and that you liked em.. i was thinking oh cool.. super.. now i think its AWESOME to get a compliment from you.. not gonna be modest here.. i'm gonna enjoy everybit of the compliment you gave me (cuz i dun get too many).. :P
indirectly telling you that you're a god... nice stuff... so so soo very deep.. (>_<) will drop by your blog soon.. thanks again...
Lovely:) uv started with one thought and wandered elsewhere..dont we all in all that we do:)
How much do I agree to it, Chaggs... Really the time's running out & there are so many roles to play..
A big hug to you too for writing something so wonderful.. u deserve one!!!! :) :)
This poem's got a lot of depth and pain... yet with a dash of subtlety, innocence and Hope... Being able to draw so many parallel emotions and nuances together, interweaving them beautifully and in a way that can poke even the hardest of hearts...
I would say... a great job done!!!! :) :)
Read all ur poems in one breath. phew :) :)
Looking forward to more from now on!!!
Akshaya Thnx so much for passin by....
Thnx so much Anu. Plz kp comin....
Purvi thnx a lot for such wonderful words of praise.Plz kp comin....
Dewdropz well it happens to all of us wandering thoughts and wandering minds....
Thnx Meow for leavin ur as always words of praise....
Thnx Diva.I so appreciate u having spend time on going thru the posts.Plz kp comin....
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