I remember awfully one line from a random Shahrukh commercial one that fits this odd slightly high state poem of mine after being half a bottle of Rum down- Zindagi mein kai humsafar milenge par Humraahi hoga sirf ek. On the salsa front i only can say " I rather dance with you than talk with you".... A gibberish from a happy person feeling damn light and confident of his matters of the heart....
I think i have loved the very best
I think i want to have the very best
I can even gatecrash and steal if that's what it takes
Or have a stunner to go weak in the knees for me....
I know i am there in the big league
Running for my dreams but also getting them
So many great lovers i brush by
Not many though i get to live by
I still am a nice person at heart
Smiling each time i imagine me
Me with myself or somewhere up there
With a girl of my dreams or a new filler
Oh i mean no harm coz i am all simple
Out when it comes to love all i have is dimples
Get attracted by them or see deep inside my heart
& i will take u to a world u'l love from the start
I know i can love and be loved like never before
I know i can sweep u off ur feet i am too sure
All i know is i will have my share of love
From someone so amazing like d stars above
Once i get there, fight it and i find her
I will keep her for good let nothing matter
Whether it takes a gatecrash, a steal, one step or a million miles,
A war, a mission impossible but i will have her for the rest of our lives
And i so love her i so love her i soooooooo love her.... Well she is still to come and i shall wait until she's there.
An Ode to the Neighbor
9 months ago
18 comments:
I feel a great sense of optimism reading these lines! Very well composed!
respect the feelings and the lovely composition .. but on a lighter note .. if you don't mind.. my philo is -- why love only one time.. always love like its the first time.. :)
@Rakesh: Yes thot its bn a while since i hv bn ramblin. Lets change it to bein grateful and imagine a nicer heart's perspective....
@Aria: u wud put me in the category i so easily fit at time- Man Slut but then my expectations and reasons are much more beyond a Slut....
Poem is refreshing and quite optimistic. All the best!
I agree you'll come across several till you find that one :) Hope you get there sooner than later ...good luck :)
Ah! And I wonder what a full bottle would do to you ;)
All d best for your tryst
keep it rollin;)
hello... i came across ur blog randomly... though i don't write blog myself bt i prefer hovering over peolpe's blog... an honset confession..i did feel like commenting on each of ur post..they r so genuine!incessent flows of expression expressed in a composed manner..they do reflect ur part of ur honesty..posting this comment is absolutely an impulsive action from my side... well i couldnt resist myself:)take care and keep on composing such "not so perfect" creations...
@Whoami: Thanks dear....
@Gauri: I wish i come soon....
@Scribbler: The full bottle wud be when u r there as well. We shall write a book in that case;)
@Anonymous: Wud hv been nice had i got a name but anyways thank you so much for passin by and liking them. Kp droppin by....
Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!
I always wish anonymity can be avoided and i could know the names of people sweet enough to pass by my blog. Thank you so much and keep coming....
like the positive vibes that the poem gives. :-) cute n funny too.
Thanks Arunima....
In my Dreams ,You know ,Who You Are
I Whisper Prayers ,To be Heard ,the Truth ,
That what I am suppose to do ,as answer to Prayers .
Setting ,You Free ,of every hearing My heart beat ,I shall ,give my all
oh how life ,could open up to give fresh start ,to love ,share our lives as we both know and believed it should been ,I been trying get back to you ,
the days turned to months
now my heart weeps ,as I can't feel you ,near as always held .
I am scared ,
I sound silly
I believe speaking What is Truth in your Heart
Never can be Silly
As it has taken me all this time ,to reach deep within me ,set my own ,free ,see a truth that was screaming to be Heard ,before it was lost .
I prayed for Time
Prayed ,you be watched over ,
Prayed for understanding
for to love ,
I never wanted ,you out my life ,Listen to many things ,you speak of me .
maybe I've loss
A Truth that beats with my own Heart ,will be
You
Two Fools that kept pushing each other away
Two fools ,that wouldn't pick up a phone ,or talk
two fools ,with a smile
Let go
rest our lives
those two fools
will always feel those beats of
"our hearts "
wiping away my Tears ,Screaming with my complete Soul to be Heard
I Love You
My Dreams ,you will always be ,maybe in life ,couldn't be together ,as I would gave
was no one that was there to Listen
Was always there ,to fix me
Was none that accepted ,after hearing truth
there was many that was there to Judge
As ,it must of seemed ,my heart ,felt nothing
as must seemed things I done ,was heartless
dreams ,you shall be ,with me that ,holds no judging ,only accepting ,with love ,we always knew
thank u for giving a nice poem expressing a deep feeling beyond love. why no updates?
Keep it up....still searching :)
@Shadow: I loved ur poem & I sincerely apologize for not having read it all this while. Plz communicate so I get to know this wonderful person...
Thanks Prabhamani well lets say hv got too busy doing my own thing that there's no time to acknowledge or reflect.
Thanks Sandy I hv d hopes but would hopefully let go of it... ;)
Redefining Oblivion wishes you a Very Happy, Healthy, Prosperous and Purposeful 2012, and beyond.
Poem is optimistic and nice.Keep writing.
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