Sunday, October 19, 2008

Honey not this time, maybe some other time….

One phone call one fine day from a soul so dear to me
She says “Shall we run away? Shall we get lost in the wilderness??”
My heart raced at the idea but somewhere I knew her reputation
Still letting it be as it’s always been allowing my mind to let her play with
We plan a date and a time, getting down to finalizing check points
Total distance to be covered, where to meet, how to go forward
Scramble for flight tickets, bus tickets to the next destination
What about hotel she asks, I say leave it to me. Bus is done, check the flight!
I slowly get into the reminiscent goosebumpy mood, like the very first time
I am already there in the moment as if the journey has begun finally….
I search for hotels, find some great discount rates, ask her to start packing
She is nervous but excited says how am I gonna wake up this early
I say don worry I will wake u up like always. She smiles then just nudges
What about the return journey? I say we’l manage but she latches on to it
No we are cutting too fine. It won’t work Chirag!
It’s all your fault, we could have planned better. Don’t u ever say that I don’t try,
I did this time and you didn’t plan it well.
All I said laughingly was that- “Doll I lived my journey in the last three hours that we spoke on phone, looked for buses and hotels, hearing ur excitement and last of all your never-ending last minute confusion. I loved it and I am thankful to you for it. U take care and sleep tight. Muah gudnite….”

It’s been 9 yrs now and it’s the same old story that repeats with her. Now I just laugh over it, getting the cute feeling but only to the point of smiling nothing else. She’s always having her pet line- Honey not this time, maybe some other time….

A poem on this individual comin next....

26 comments:

Unknown said...

Opss..Smile Away :)

Shravan Vijayaprasad said...

Haha!! That's an interesting character..

Waiting for the poem on her!!

whoami said...

Awaiting with bated breath ;)

Bhai with Chai said...

oi.. crazy!
and as shrav put it.. interesting!

Chaggoholic.... said...

Hey Crazyheart thnk u for the comment. Be around....

Shrav thnx man well the character is surely interestin no wonder she's been around for so long now;)

Whoami yes yes i know u r too curious. Its comin dear soon....

Bhai thnku for comin by.Plz kp droppin by....

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Whoa! 9 years and counting!!!! Superb feeling it must be, eh!

Cheers to both of you, and when u do decide to scoot, I hope it is to a place as serene as the beach, from the movie the beach!

Rock Chag ;)

mixdbrew said...

Hmmm...interesting. And if i may ask, ahem! what 'wilderness' were you talking about??

Unknown said...

n man i thought a year n a half was good enough for u!
winks*
keep goin ..
winks again**

The Happy-hungry Wanderer said...

Whoa!! Very Very "Cute" :-) Sorry for dat word; which s considered extremely girleee!! LOL, but haan!! "Dont worry, I shall wake yo up lyk I always do" :-p Those lines make me smilee away to glory.. Nice One.

Arunima said...

So u succeeded in building up the curiosity...interesting character.
If u don mind I wantd 2 ask if it's in reality or jst a figment of ur imagination

Gauri said...

9 years haan !!
Lucky gurl I would say ;)
Waiting in anticipation for the next one :)

Meher :) said...

Wow!

9 years is like really long! :) And very nice!


Guess some more about her would throw light on understanding this lady better :)

Waiting for the poem now! So at-least for that - I know a second visit here is assured :D

Meow said...

So Finally its out :)
But this is only a chunk of what I heard that day, isn't it?

Anonymous said...

Damnit!

its the same with all girls

Akshaya Kamalnath said...

Hey that's normal. Excitement for the plan which fizzles out pretty quickly. Maybe you should make better plans for the excitement not to die down:)

Chaggoholic.... said...

Rakesh thnx man.I wont say much as my next poem will shed light as well as veils from this lady.

For now just know for ur interest she's the lady from my poem "Why so Serious????" first para so 9 yrs isnt really a relationship goin strong but infact my willingness to be disposed off time after time. As of now we are just gud frnds. Thats about it....

Chaggoholic.... said...

Mixedbrew thnx for coming. The wilderness in question is Kanyakumari. Initially we had thot of Pondicherry but then she wanted to go far....

Taru u know what it is still pullin my leg.Grt anyways wait for the poem, shud do fittin justice to her....

Sanjana i m glad u liked it and hey no i didnt mind the cute part of it....

Arunima it is very much reality and you shalal know more soon.For now she's also ther in my poem "Why so serious????" See if that adds some twist;)....

Chaggoholic.... said...

Gauri yeah she is surely lucky but not to have me anymore as someone special. I m a mere frnd now. She's had enuf chances but ruined them.LOL;)

Sindhu thnx dear for passin by and vowin to come again. Well i wont dissappoint u for sure....

Meow yup its cut short.Didnt want a longish one. Next part comin soon within 2-3 days. Kp comin....

Deluded it sure is the same wid all but then some relaise atleast in a year. Here we have a 9yr example....

Keshi said...

hahahaha nice one!

Keshi.

Anonymous said...

9 years :-o

Whoa! Waiting for the poem :)

Unknown said...

hehe nice...:)

waiting for the poem now..

Chaggoholic.... said...

Akshaya u talk quite like her;) well spontaneous plans made jus like that if somehow made up for give u an immense sense of fairytale pleasure....

Keshi thnk u so much....

Queenie thnx dear.Yup the follow up comes soon....

Anila thnk u dear yes yes its comin soon....

Jayashree and Just Jay said...

A beautiful story written very beatifully....

Honey not this time, maybe some other time, well, whole point of the story lies here..

Yes dear, A small thought, Patience and Time will definitely make you win the race which you are striving for...

There would definitely be a happy ending and would also write a beautiful story that you both finally met, and living a happy life together for ever and ever and ever.

All the best!
Cheers, a Very nice and Cute peom of feelings and love.

A

Wandering Minstrel said...

its one of those posts that make u go awwwww :)

Anonymous said...

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Chaggoholic.... said...

Well how do u want to prove it?My id is rockchag@gmail.com